My Pitch.

I presented my pitch to my group, and got some feedback. The overall response was positive and the group liked my idea. The main feedback I got was to refine the presentation further so my ideas were presented simply and without confusion.

I didn't receive any feedback on the proposed content of my poster, e.g. the tagline or the imagery, but was praised on the strength of my designs (the quality of my mock ups and my use of illustrator) and the way I have worked in order to come to each decision.